Sunday, September 4, 2011

A Feeble Attempt

She is the first face he sees in the morning,
The last in the night
The one in all his prayers,
The one he loves with all his might.
She is the one thinks about during the day,
And worries if she is late at night.
She is the queen of his home,
Light of his life.
And she runs to him happy or sad,
Has there ever been a love known, like daughter and dad?

5 comments:

  1. brilliant! simple, to the point, and may I add, it threw me a little off-balance in the end. . keep writing!

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  2. thanks RJ! it gives me confidence to write more poetry. i have started writing many times but dropped them in mid-way

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  3. Nice post. I really like it. Thank you.


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  5. a beautiful relation nicely portrayed.. :)

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